Since you’ve said you like typos pointed out, I’ll mention this last sentence is awkward. There’s an extra “he” and the parenthetical doesn’t fit with the flow. Something like this might be better :)

“I need him to tell me (even if it’s a lie) that he didn’t wish my breasts were any bigger.”

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